One thing I learned about you is that you love sports and have a great appreciation from the hard work your family has put into getting where you are today. Your family is similar to mine because we also have big family get togethers and love the outdoors. The best thing about your digital story is your pictures and the first slide in your digital story is a great representation of family. One think you could change is some slides have writing that is hard to see, but when read is very personal and sweet.
One thing I learned about you is that you have a close family just like I do. I wouldn't give up my family for anything. The best thing about your story is the music works so well with your pictures. Everything worked so well together. I loved the very personal slide about your uncle and grandmother. A few slides were hard to read but other than that I loved it. Good job :)
One thing I learned about you is you can write a really compelling poem. Your story is beautiful. Your family is similar to mine because you all are very close. The best thing about your digital story is the sentiment in each frame. One think you could change is to make the words a little bigger. They are beautiful words but some people may have trouble reading the smaller font. Great Job!
I liked the story of your grandmother and the love you have for your ancestors. Also, my family is always gets together for holidays, birthdays, etc. I think the hearts on your lettering is pretty, but I might change the color of a few slides; it blended into the background and mande it a little hard to read.
One thing I learned about you is that you have an Uncle Bill, who, through a great story, joined the air force! I really enjoyed your video! Two of my favorite things were the font with the hearts, and the family poem on the first slide! Our families are alike in many ways, especially including the hunting,fishing, and four wheeler rides! The only thing I would consider changing in your video is the pink font color, sometimes I had a lot of trouble reading the words. Great video!
One thing that I learned about you is baked mac n cheese! I love that too! And the story of your grandparents, precious! Your family is similar to mine because you are very close! You are also an aunt!! I loved loved loved the quotes that you used!! One thing that I would change is the pace and maybe make the words a little easier to read =) Great job!!
One thing I learned about you is that you have strong family ties. I find this to be similar to my family. I really like how everything moved along and your wording. I think you did a great job and the only thing I would change is on a couple of the slides it was hard to read the wording because of the color.
Renita I pretty much knew all this stuff about you expect for your Uncles story! I loved your video, you did a wonderful job. My favorite parts were the font, music and pictures. We are alike because we both are from Fairmont:) Maybe use black background for the font I dunno if this will help with the wording.
One thing I learned about you is that you obviously love your family and friends, and are very proud of them! One thing that is similar about us is that we are both aunts (you now know this)! The best part of your digital story was the quotes that you used, very sweet. One thing that you could change is the font color of some of the slides; some were kind of hard to read. Great job :)
My name is Renita. I am a senior at Fairmont State University. I am very excited this year. There is so much going on in my life. One big thing being graduating in December.
One thing I learned about you is that you love sports and have a great appreciation from the hard work your family has put into getting where you are today.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar to mine because we also have big family get togethers and love the outdoors.
The best thing about your digital story is your pictures and the first slide in your digital story is a great representation of family.
One think you could change is some slides have writing that is hard to see, but when read is very personal and sweet.
One thing I learned about you is that you have a close family just like I do. I wouldn't give up my family for anything. The best thing about your story is the music works so well with your pictures. Everything worked so well together. I loved the very personal slide about your uncle and grandmother. A few slides were hard to read but other than that I loved it. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is you can write a really compelling poem. Your story is beautiful. Your family is similar to mine because you all are very close. The best thing about your digital story is the sentiment in each frame.
ReplyDeleteOne think you could change is to make the words a little bigger. They are beautiful words but some people may have trouble reading the smaller font. Great Job!
I liked the story of your grandmother and the love you have for your ancestors. Also, my family is always gets together for holidays, birthdays, etc. I think the hearts on your lettering is pretty, but I might change the color of a few slides; it blended into the background and mande it a little hard to read.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you have an Uncle Bill, who, through a great story, joined the air force! I really enjoyed your video! Two of my favorite things were the font with the hearts, and the family poem on the first slide! Our families are alike in many ways, especially including the hunting,fishing, and four wheeler rides! The only thing I would consider changing in your video is the pink font color, sometimes I had a lot of trouble reading the words. Great video!
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I learned about you is baked mac n cheese! I love that too! And the story of your grandparents, precious! Your family is similar to mine because you are very close! You are also an aunt!! I loved loved loved the quotes that you used!! One thing that I would change is the pace and maybe make the words a little easier to read =)
ReplyDeleteGreat job!!
One thing I learned about you is that you have strong family ties. I find this to be similar to my family. I really like how everything moved along and your wording. I think you did a great job and the only thing I would change is on a couple of the slides it was hard to read the wording because of the color.
ReplyDeleteRenita I pretty much knew all this stuff about you expect for your Uncles story! I loved your video, you did a wonderful job. My favorite parts were the font, music and pictures. We are alike because we both are from Fairmont:) Maybe use black background for the font I dunno if this will help with the wording.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you obviously love your family and friends, and are very proud of them! One thing that is similar about us is that we are both aunts (you now know this)! The best part of your digital story was the quotes that you used, very sweet. One thing that you could change is the font color of some of the slides; some were kind of hard to read. Great job :)
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